Plz see my site and give me some comments

Hello!!!
I am a bigner. I have made a simple flash site.
Please see it and give useful comments…
flames are heppely accepted… >:)

and also
http://www.aadab.cjb.net

NOTE :- The movies is attached with the message…

I cannot see anything from any of your links…

alot of pop ups. and it took a while to load. i xed out after a while

if you have alot of animation or flash that could be the problem.

Pop Up ads SUCK and I would try a preloader… your movie is taking forever from a T1 line to load. The mouse trail is old.

Gator corp pop ups, come on!
Runtime error on line 169 permission denied.
lighten up on the Java scripting rookie!

Just my opinion…

Ciao’