Poster project - input need

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Hey everyone… haven’t been around in a while… so HI again! =)

I wanted some input on something I am working on. It is a poster style project that has a “pro-democracy, pro-freedom, voting is good, voice your opinion, etc…” theme behind it. This what I’ve got so far… I wanted it to stay clean/simple, but be attractive and get the message across.

I feel it is missing something, just cant put my finger on it… ideas/comments??

of course this is a WAY scaled down version

Peace

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I think you need more contrast between the greens…

I also think the font is a cop-out. Try to find something with some emotion behind it…

if I could be more vague, believe me I would…

Howz SB?

Rev

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I definitly agree about the font… I’m gonna look for something good, that might be it. SB… well interesting you mention it, I am currently in AZ on my way to Chicago where I will be living for about a year (after which I will be returning to the SB area!)…

Anyone else have some ideas??

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I might need to rethink the entire typo… hmmmm it might be killing it… **** I just dont know.

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I like the graphic, but maybe a blue bg…

then the font could be a bolder, rounder font…

also, you have no white whatsoever included…

just more input

Rev

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still looking for a font… here are some others colors I was messin with so I put em all together:

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The one with white backround is OK, but I suggest to change the hand color (only) scheme to red-orange-brown.
Nice work. I like the simplicity.

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that’s a sweet poster in all colors actually. I agree with the font,
and before I read any of the posts is what I was gonna say.

Since it’s theme seems to be more out of peace than anything,
i would stay away from red. I actually like the green (1st one you
posted) and the white-ish one. I don’t necessarily agree it should
be red for the hand, but some other really contrasting color would
look superb – maybe the bluish-purple of the one on the left.

sweet concept though, all around. =)

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Im still looking for a good font for this one… nothing seems to grab me…hmmm. Well here is yet another version:

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here is something quick

Rev

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see I think those fonts look too…casual, comic, loopy, whatever… Im trying to convey power in the message… id like to keep it all in the same font, and I definitly dont want the FONT to stand out but rather the words… know what I mean… I see where you are coming from - the font needs more emotion behind it… I am just having a hard time finding something that is balanced between the aspects… “circle of hell” by Chaz Maviyana-Davies is a good example… man could I use any more words to explain that? and could I be less clear?

Peace

oh also “Cimas HIV” by the same person