hey who can give me some tips to improve my website. www.pascadoo.tk
Ok. Dont take me wronge but I will tell you what you whant to hear (-:
Select all your files, and press the delete button.
Now start up flash mx and go and do most of the tutorials found in Kirupa, then draw your dream site and start creating, add colors, sound, animation, and loader 
make it simple and colorfull.
Thats what hmm =)
Good luck m8
hey Blastboy! the whole site does not have to be in flash! Just because you like it and can use, it doesn’t mean everyone else feels the same!
I see what you are saying about deleting the files though. This is a touch exteme though. DONT DELETE ALL YOUR FILES! just modify them.
All you need to do is give the site a bit of a redesign. Heres some things that initially:[list][]Splashpage Get rid of it. It is too dull and discourages browsing.[]color scheme Your current colors are a little dull. Grey is a fine color to use, but i think you may have overdone it. If you wish to continue using grey, hy not complement the grey by incorporating some metalic-silver looking imagery? Perhaps your buttons and title text can be done this way? [*]flash menu Nice to see you using flash, but there is no need for it in your current menu. Flash was created to add interactive and engaging content to websites, there is nothing like that in your menu (sorry!). Why not liven it up a bit by adding some roll-over effects? if you need ideas check out the kirupa tutorials - they are very good and i strongly recomend them[/list]
Thats things specific to your site. If it is a redesign you are aiming for, then general things you may wish to consider are: [list][]Theme Think of a theme for your website. Keep it all consistant. For example, if you aim for a hi-tech look, then ensure all your pages have the same ‘feel’ about them. []color Try to keep the color consistant also. Alternatively, why not give each section on your website its own color scheme (E.G: red for main section, blue for games section, green for news section etc…) [*]interfaceyou need to consider how others are going to browse you website. what you currently have is fine (title at top, links to the left) although you may wish to expand on this and explore other possibilitys. Ideally, your website should be as easy and intuative as possible.[/list]
Hope that helps you buddy, sorry if I seem a little cruel. I meant it all in a constuctive manner!
Feel free to PM me if you are a little unsure about anything i said.
Good luck!
[color=orange]Olly[/color]
the layout looks too crowded. Organise the matter, remove the intro page. And don’t expect people to download fonts just to view the website properly. And the text should be brighter, and make a colour scheme! red, blue green yellow but not grey
your site is too dark and as kartik said it is too crowded
I cant believe u post this site 3 times in 7 days in different areas of kirupa, let me give you a hint, so u post the site and since noone is really looking at it the site moves on to a second page, if u want your site to be on the first page again the only thing you have to do its comment again…for example hey you all I just did a update check it out.
File select drag drop to trash seems like a great idea, I’m suprised that you ask for more comments and you didnt even fix those mistakes from another 2 topics that people took their time to explain what works and what doesnt work.
