WIP: 3 Ad Series (1 of 3)

Hey everyone, didnt know where to put this so it’s here…

Im doing this Series of 3 Ads for my Graphic Design Applications Course (Quark Xpress).

The topics were open, so naturally with me being a huge Hockey fan, I chose CCM Hockey Equipment.

I wanted to base my entire ad series on the heritage/history of CCM. They’ve been around for over 100 years so I feel it’d be a good idea.

Also I just felt to stray from photos since I can’t professionally photograph any equipment. So I’m basing the ad on typography.

Anyway, here is the 1st ad.

Before I continue with it, I’d like to hear suggestions, comments, praise ect.

please be honest, I really would like for this project to mop the floor with the other student’s work.

http://www.nicklomedia.com/gallery/ad1.pdf

Updated: http://www.nicklomedia.com/gallery/ad1b.pdf