Any suggestions on this?

talk design
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give this a visit

http://www.geocities.com/william_s_enriquez/optical/

a try to make it as simple as possible, i ain’t a poet or something
i just like tot make a site with calmness :wink:

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Here are the problems I noticed:

  1. The text on your splash page is really hard to read since it’s so blurry.

  2. The hitarea of the “enter” on the splash screen needs to be fixed so that the viewer doesn’t have to click on the actual letters to enter. You can easily fix that by placing a rectangle on the hit frame of the button symbol if you’re using a button or create a insvisible movieclip if you’re using a movieclip symbol.

  3. Your main layout looks pretty good except for the text buttons, I think those could use a bit more work. I think they’re a bit too bold and big for the layout.

There isn’t any content so I don’t know what you’re doing for transitions, but it looks good so far, just some minor problems. I wanted to take a 2nd look, but when I tried to come to the site a 2nd time, the bandwidth limit was reached. :-\

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thanks eg, i’ll fix those prob.

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the summer and winter pages really chug on my pc :confused:

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that was nice… i felt at peace with myself and the world… seriously i enjoyed that… we need more nice websites that serve no purpose… thats it… for my next site i make for fun… its gonna be called something creative… and be about absolutely nothing… and it will be good…:slight_smile:

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hope to see your site when it’s done parabol