Beatbox industries 2006 back for more

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YO - Back again. I posted before and got picked apart, changed a few things, and here I am. to get picked apart some more i guess.

www.beatboxindustries.com/new_site.html

Couple of things -
Flash and Misc pages aren’t up
About me and Contact pages aren’t finish.

Other than that, have a ball

Thanks

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the text must be directly pressed in the splash:) make the hitArea bigger
i like the style:thumb:
btw, the robot looks hawt:)

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^^ Yea on the enter page you need to put a hitbox around the enter text.

:lol: I oddly like this site a bit… not really sure why… it’s not graphically impressive, but I like the fun atmosphere behind it all.

The things I will mention though… is the handwritten text I don’t think flows with the site well. I think it should be a more personalized handwritten font, maybe something you write up and what not.

I think the squares shouldn’t be square, you should make them some abstract shapes, to improve on the fun feel you’ve got goin on the site. Perhaps… I dunno… square might be the best option.

I’m not fond of how the portfolio is workin, I don’t like the way the text replaces the thumbnails.

I love the music though… that Sonic one is definately off the chain. But I don’t like the way the box represents the player.

I really like the random graphics :lol: like the KoolAid man… makes me think of that Family Guy ep where he bashes through the wall, and also the Dane Cook KoolAid skit :D.

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yeah its really nice/fun too look at. not much going on but the popup graphics are wicked. pretty nice site, good job man.

yes the music is awsome, and i think that the box to represent the music player is a good idea. its a step away from every other website out there.

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I am using a machine right now with FP7, all i got was a preloader and a white screen. If i were you, i’d take a look at the Version Detection Kit from Macromedia

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cool that music is from Sega Sonic The Hedgehog Game…

I like the art

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It’s kind of funny, it has a nice atmosphere, though, you need to create the hitbox button.

And the music, maybe for a minute it’s fine, but think, if you want people to stay it can bother your clients!

Try a different font, just try!

And yeah!, the koolaid man is really nice…lol!

:wink:

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Ok - fixed a few more things… now check it out one more timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee… thanks - Chris

use this link this time

www.beatboxindustries.com

THANKS

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I really like the style, but i think the domain is AWESOME :smiley:
Congratulations really nice site you have there!!!

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love the robot and the sonic remix

great even to just hear “SEGA”…class :thumb:

robot makes the site 100% better. big improvements from last time. I’d actually bookmarked your site last time and had a look last week, impressed by the robot then and now you’ve added colour in the shape of the orange/red/yellow circles…great

one small nagging thing. On initially entering the site I’m asked to click here to enter. Preloader comes up and then when it’s done I need to click again…I’d remove the need for that last click but like I say that is a small problem

site was good before, congrats it reached great :cool:

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Awesome design. One tiny little thing i did notice . . . in the print section, the poster for the toga party, might want to censor the guy’s phone number. Almost gave him a call myself, you know, since me and ol’ Conrad go way back.