what would make my site a better place?
cheers
eric
I think I can see what you are trying to achieve and it looks like you fall short of your goal but only just! 
It is a good job so far!
Your BG image looks to Cut out. Have you made the Image bigger than it was imported in to Flash? The streetlights look a bit fuzzy too. You should cut things out in Photoshop [or whatever] at a higher resolution then shrink it down [and use the sharpen filter] to the end size you need.
The white block you see after you mouse over a link is a bit on the week side. This could be the first time potential clients see your work, so your site has to be as innovative as you can make it.
I’m not to sure why this happens but when I mouse over a menu title like Web, another box appears saying exactly the same thing. This happens to all your title buttons for some reason.
Most of your text is nice and crisp looking. The titles let you down though. How about using the same font as the body text but in bold and maybe even a point or two larger?
It’s looking very static for a Flash site. It could do with some BG animation or sound.
When I mouse over Motion it makes my speakers hiss for no reason. Have you added a mouse over sound effect?
The drop shadow on the right side looks a bit odd. Maybe because it’s only on one side?
It does need something but I’m not sure if that’s it.
Apart from that, it looks nice.
The way the Nice one sits in the content window is cool [The I in nice looks like it needs some cleaning up as the red outline is scuffed].
Nice work man.
its pretty smooth, just the rollover thing seems a bit show offy…?! maybe you could change that a bit but everything is still nice
it’s definitely original, I’ll give you that. Lots of cool ideas give it
a nice unique feel.
I agree, tho, that there are some things to clean up, but overall
a great nice. nice!
/unflux
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Nice job.
I like the first screeen the best, looks very promising. I especially like your logo, very well executed. Nice job of colorscheme. I like the fact that its a slim vertical layout.
The only thing I would improve is the layout and delivery of content. I would like to see you carry the intro screen through to the actualy content. I like the detail and quality of the the graphic design on the intro page…if you could only keep with that style once you get to your content. I think its the simplicity that works on teh intro screen for me…by that I mean you have a nice quality graphic design, yet minimalist, if you continue that inside, then you are golde. I hope that helped somewhat.
Great job.
akurth
http://www.alexkurth.com
Very Nice,
I like the bg image and the logo, and the intro is great. I didn’t like the “we’re done” page and the content seems small in relation to the rest of the page.
