here’s one of my first…so help me improve on it =)
i think the words in the upper left hand corner are kinda extra…any idea how i can blend it in, should i get rid of it, or is it completely ok?
suggestions, critism, watever, pls
I think the words look kinda weird on a heavy grid like that, and the flare in the background looks a little grittish.
Should have the same sharpness as the rest of the image…
oh, and add some color! unless it’s the black&white look you’re after 
neat…! 
Good for a first try…!
haha…but i can’t seem to find a suitable color scheme 
um…looks gritty? u talking about the ‘rays’, rite? i made it by drawing the lines and then radial blurring it…i used the good quality, maybe i should use the best quality next time 
i have made some changes, including removing the words in the upperleft…but i can’t change the flare cos i don’t want to do it again 
(took quite awhile ;))
thx for your comments…
*(Anyone else? =) ) *
oki, but u could also go for the built in flare filter…
that wouldn’t be too original, would it? 
Heck no… it’s there for a reason…
lol ok…