Critique and Experts needed!

Thanks everyone for their feedback! FlashFish: I donā€™t think anymore sections on the conveyor belt itself will be added, but new artwork will be added to the portfolios sections - if it getā€™s too much, I will likely stick everything in an archive and just display the latest works. But since Iā€™m slow as molasses, that area wonā€™t grow too much most likely.

I donā€™t know if anyone noticed, but I managed to fix the nasty side scroller snag. Now for some reason, the loading text animation wonā€™t show up!! As old problems are solved, new ones seem to be cropping upā€¦

Rennygirl,
I really liked your site. It was fresh and well done. the download wasnā€™t bad at all with a 56K here. The inside was just refreshingly different. Very nice!

Phil

BTW, I have to ask you, is your body really that tiny? Or is it a morphed image?
I mean, if itā€™s that tiny, I am not trying to make you pheel bad or anything or self conscience, but I am curious, ya know?

Hehe, yes, I am actually 60 pixels tall. =P

Itā€™s a roughly photoshopped bodyā€¦ thereā€™s a story about it and you can read it here: My Date with Rengirl

I really like that site. I was wondering : how did you design it ? Flash all the way down or did you mix pleasures ?? Anyway, that point of view, slightly from above (3 quarters in French, no idea how to say that in English) is a great idea. And that little rolling carpet (???) is definitely the most intriguing thing.
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Aside from the imported jpegs done in Photoshop, itā€™s all flash baby! I really have no knowledge in director or any 3d programs to mix in with it. Actually I tried rendering some 3d images in 3D Studio Max, but that just didnā€™t work out well.

is sound missing from your site or am i deaf :wink: btw, the text you (want) to load never showed upā€¦Sometimes loading info from a txt file lagsā€¦for some reason.

There is no sound Paranoid - Iā€™m not a fan of sound coming from websites since it disturbs the current tunes to which I am jamming to. Plus, I didnā€™t want to add to the already enormous download.

Yes, I am actually having problems with the text thing (youā€™ll see above that I posted it). The text took a while to load so I added a ā€œLoading Textā€ anim (to check if the text variables are empty), but it wonā€™t show up for some reason. I have been trying to fix it, on and off, or weeks!

with your metaphor (machinery, conveyer belt etc) youā€™d be remiss not to add sound iā€™m afraid. For me, sound is one of the things that FLASH exemplefies in the new mediaā€“creative use of sound.

wouldā€™nt you say that one noticing the lack of sound draws attention to the fact that it may be worthwhile to add it to your site?

I think forgetting sound in flash is akin to using straight bitmap grapicsā€¦it defeats the purpose.

It depends. Music?, Iā€™d leave that out in almost any site that I made, but sound effectsā€¦ yeah, Iā€™d say that they would improve the site.

But quite a handful of people have told me or responded to a site check thread that they liked that I didnā€™t a) have a pop-up for my interface and/or b) used sound. But you are right: maybe a ā€œdoingā€ when a button is pressed or ā€œtingā€ when content is loaded or ā€œbuzzā€ when the conveyor belt rolls would be effective. I do want to fully utilize flashā€™s capabilities after all. Iā€™ll look into it as soon as I fix this loading text thing.

using a program such as Soundforge, and export correctly, sounds will barely make an impact. As always you can use shared libraries, in a separate file, downloaded after the main content appears, and link sounds from there. All the best sites in flash do use sound though :wink:

Neato! I actually visited this site maybe a month or so ago. I think it was a link from avocado-something or other.com.

That was before I found kirupaā€™s site actually. Small digital world; I didnā€™t know that was you. :slight_smile:

I like the style of the main site. I feel like I am inside iconfactory. :slight_smile:

Great stuff, Renni!

Now if only I could find a girlfriend in Houston that did Flash. Heck, Iā€™d be happy with a girlfriend that even knew what Flash was. :stuck_out_tongue:

t2d

Stop daydreaming, t2dā€¦
RenniGi, will you tell me some day how you did that rolling carpet thing ???

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I could tell you right now!

The carpet (or conveyor belt) isnā€™t actually rolling, but the little dashes move along to make it look like itā€™s rolling. Thatā€™s accomplished with a simple motion tween with a guide so that it hugs the beltā€™s surface. Add a couple of rolling wheels and the effect is accomplished!

And ofcourse, the thing rolls on command using the ā€œtellTargetā€ function.

Ok, so please go to this post :
pub40.ezboard.com/fkirupaā€¦=444.topic
I explain my problem a little bit betterā€¦

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Thanks for quoting me in your site !!

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I have to get that * conveyor belt* (* rolling carpet* sounds better) to work !! This is making me crazysensei !!

Hey did you check out my responses to that other thread? I didnā€™t hear from you anymore after thatā€¦ so Iā€™m not sure if you need additional help.

Yes I got it. Actually I didnā€™t try that hard to have it working. Darn exams !!
Iā€™ll try after that.

Thanks

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well an exclllent site a very good job
keep up the good work
by any chance can u guide me as to how can i get the text scroller with the scroll bar can u guide me to some tutorial i am in need of that very badly
Ebu

Sure! Here you go:

www.flashkit.com/tutorialā€¦ndex.shtml