First flash site

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not too long ago i made my first photoshop web page,then i kinda forgot about it and start to play around with this flash thing,which i think is really really cool in making web pages.
this is my first site.

warning site contains alot flash if u are epilectic plz dont look at it

http://speedclub.tk if this link doesnt work try this one

http://guyanaweb.t35.com

tell me what u think

thank u

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It looks pretty nice. I do think that all the flashing could be toned down a little. It doesn’t look very professional and it hurts your eyes. Some subtle animation would definately look better. Also there purple writing on the car is very hard to read. I think you’re over using that Spiderman/Smashing Pumpkins font. Other than that it’s pretty good for your first flash site.

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ok thanks but i dont know what color for to put for the font most of the color just fades out with the bg and if i try a color like green it would look stupid right

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I think I just had a seizuor. Too much flashing things. If you don’t get rid of at least some your going to have to put a disclaimer about how the site could cause epilipsy like game developers do.

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oh u serious
**** i am sorry i didnt know
thanks for the tip i am going to take it down

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Don’t take it down, just work on it. You have a great start, but it needs to be toned down a bit.

I am terribly sorry if you really thought I had a seizour. I did not have one. I was just illustrating through words what I thought about the animations and stuff. Sorry for any confusion.

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lol
ok,well i got to put a warning up on the furrom cuz maybe it could
right

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good start, you should invest in your own hosting and not some free place that has pop ups, that would make it better right off the start. maybe the fonts could be made a little smaller or just some of them. at first glance they all seem to be about the same size.

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ok thank u rlife

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It’s looking good. The only beef I have is that I could start a rave with the techno and all the flashing. As mentioned before, tone it down just a [size=-2]little[/size] bit and you’ll be good.

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lol

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Flashing good in beginning. Nonstop flashing on logo bad. Excellent first site. Fonts need to be smaller also. I don’t even know how to build a flash website yet so you’re farther than I am. Good job!

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thanks scatterbrain

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the loading screen change the Loading Text color i almost exited off after seeing it needs to be darker but nice site

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ok thank u Brandon