I have taken most of your suggestions from my last crit post(most were very helpful). Tell me what you think of this new version. I finally had time to work on it since I’ve been home sick with pink eye:)
http://www.dougloffredo.com
Thats really nice… I didn’t see your first version though
:thumb: Good job!
looks clean but I would up the fps, looks a little choppy.
^i agree. up the frame rate a bit
very nice work experience there!dc comics
i like the colors of the site too, nicely done!
Yeah it’s nice.
Make sure to put all of your items - like text fields - on whole numbers of X and Y.
very clean. on your my work section, it would be helpful to get some feedback about the site when you mouseover them. maybe a textbox somewhere, or a tooltip. i like the simplicity.
Very nice and easy to use.
I’m no pixel expert, barely understand the things in fact, but some of yours seemed a little fuzzy. I would turn off the anti-aliasing on all the small writing, and I think that the fonts in your about me section are set at too small a size for the font. They seem a little distorted on my computer, but not blurred (so I don’t think it’s an x y value problem for them anyway). Although I guess that might be because I don’t have the required font?
nice and easy to use, simple colours but I really don’t see why this couldn’t have been a XHTML/CSS site…why use flash?
I mean the transitions are ok…not great but not bad, but I think I would have lost these to make a valid CSS site.
designs nice though 
your contact form is very dirty. looks like you just used the kirupa one and changed the skin. also i wouldnt have put links to other sites in your portfolio. you want people to stay at your website NOT go somewhere else which could potentially lose the client.
Lovely site!
Suggestions:
Up the frame rate
Fix the fonts
The contact form needs some work, esp the submit button - not really feeling it
Anyway, all the best to you mate :thumb2:
looks really nice, and easy for anyone to veiw and enjoy. It was slightly choppy but nothing that was bothersome at all.
The work really shows in this layout, and your work is quite nice
Thanks for all your comments/suggestions… Il post an update in a week or so…all your feed back has been really helpfull in developing this site.
