i like what i see so far looks clean-cut, and i really like the use of colors in the sections (especially the Mission section). A couple of things i might suggest are;
1.) The transition between sections could be a little smoother, for example keeping the over outline and the menu system visible during the process of loading the next movie.
2.) While in the Home section, if you click home again, a blank screen appears.
3.) In Portfolio, the text under “Introduction” is a little hard to read. So is the text under Contact, and they are different sizes.
4.) Lastly, the graphic you have of the bar code and the “V2.1” is a little hazy. It would look a lot nicer if you made it crisper.
Looks good overall though!
r2designz, I deleted your other thread since you made another one. I know you probably did it by mistake, but keep in mind not to create multiple threads on the same subject.
As for you site, here are the things I noticed:
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Your content text is too hard to read since you’re using a fat font that appears to look bold. I would use something that is less fat so it’s easier to read.
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I don’t like how your layout disappears every time a new section is clicked. It would be nice to have the layout remain and have some kind of transition play between sections.
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Also there’s a few problems with your contact form. First, I noticed there’s no submit button which is really odd. Second, the text indicating the input fields are out of lined and appears to be different from each other.
The only thing I did like was the color scheme and the layout, it looks clean, but the downside was your text and the disappearing layout when sections are clicked.
hey dev nice site thanks for the feedback
i appreciate i can def take the critique. I used to be an artisit
and thats all i heard. Anyway dev i dont really know how to do transitions from one page to another maybe you could give me an example but thanks for comments. EG thanks for taking time to look at my site and as for the contact page i dont know how to set up a cgi bin or php script. I dont want the cheezy default mail browser thing to come up, i want a form that is sent to my email but if you know how to do that i would be grateful ok thanks again guys
r2designz
Hi…
I agree with everything everyone else has said so theres no point repeating…
I wasn’t that impressed to be quite honest and I think I’m only replying because your site said you were professional web designers.
I don;t want to sound harsh but I don’t think that site is ever going to get you work. If it was a personal site and you wanted to do work for people and you were learning…fine I probably wouldn’t say anything…but if you’re trying to be professional then I think you need to go back and refine it all…
Sorry to be harsh, its just what I feel
postatomic :evil:
nice look but the transitions (or lack of) ar really jarring
here’s a great tut on flash transitions
sorry but i agree with postatomic. The site is very simple and easy to use but not too hard to create.
i hope you won’t hate me for my critique :pirate:
presence is mispelled on your splash page
to be a bit cuddly after the harsh words, looks like you are new to this and it takes a long time to get “good”, hell I’m forty, have a Master’s degree and have been doing flash for three years, all self-taught, I read everybook I can, and now that I have discovered this forum, I am really starting to understand.
but I know I still have a way to go before I get to be a professional, right now I just code buttons and fix spacing on other people’s work
good luck and get the group of professionals to fix that typo
