Hey, a friend asked me to design a site for him on geocities, its kinda in a “beta stage” but is getting better everyday. Please give me some critique (good or bad).
There’s a lot of problems with it, I’ll list the ones I noticed.
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The layout is really pixelated.
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Text are really blurry.
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Transitions are a bit buggy, the doors don’t work right, they sort of jump.
:-\ gotta get back to work then
text is cramped also… It hurts my eyes.
FFF Atlantis would be a fine font selection for layout
Just to help you
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You gotta use another font for the news, you broke it apart and it fills itself automatically. That means that it ain’t no good Flash font ( I thought those were for PhotoShop but I’m not sure )
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The interface graphic is totally blurred.
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The content font is blurred and is totally illegible too. Even if it wasn’t blurred, it would still be illegible. Use another font.
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The user must have choice between different songs. The song you have now is cool for the first two-three times, bu after a while it starts getting annoying. The time from my Reply button hit to this sentence that is. switches off music.
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Work on the transitions. The screens just spawn in the middle of the movie sometimes. I wrote a tutorial on how to make transitions between external loaded movies. Find it here
thx a lot for everything i’ll be sure to check out that tutorial Voetsjoeba :thumb: