My first flash website :)

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hey guys,
i respect this board and its member’s opinions, many of you have helped me out, so as ive tried to help others. :slight_smile:

Ive finally finished a revamp for a website. The orginal is here: www.triligy.com/old site/

the new one is here: www.triligy.com

Let me know what you think! It has been a real steep learning curve, but im now managing to create flash websites in a billionth of the time!

any “decent” comments will be favoured :slight_smile:

again this is my first ever launched flash site, so go somewhat easy on me.

ta very muchly
Jonathan

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Good job. I like the 3-D but there is some clipping. Fix that and your good. Also work on the placement of the content alittle more. You have potential dude. Keep it up.

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agree with what DJ said… mostly you need to work more on the layout, use grid to organize your content, I would change and use other color for link.
overall im impressed as this is your first flash… great job… like dj said, you got potential :smiley: keep it up

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thanks, guys, what do you mean by clipping? will take your responses into account. :slight_smile: always good to get other’s opinions… when you’ve seen it so many times it gets a bit sickening… :slight_smile:

the layout was i guess a little rushed. I wasnt given really much at all to work with… (slack client) Ill hopefully have a good look at it when ive recovered from it all! :slight_smile:

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looks a lot better!

I does lag tho… but I’m on an old dusty mac at school, I think it’ll run fine on the home pc. :slight_smile:

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I think the content looks a bit all over the place because Ive tried to avoid the bits that stick up from the screen - the grey bits. I might just place the content over the top of this, or do the painstaking job of removing them.

the lag could be caused as its running at 15fps… i remember seeing something about what mac interprets as apposed to what pc’s do… i could bump it up to 21.

again thanks heaps guys for taking the time out to check on it!
JD