New here, Need Critiscism

Hello fellow computer enthusiasts. My teacher wants us to create a flash site so I started on building the interface (very beta right now). But I would really appreciate your critiscism. Please don’t say its good if its not and any thing you think I should add or change. Thanks ~ reo2

http://www.ssj4net.com/test/flash_site/main3b.html

[size=200]WELCOME[/size]
:stuck_out_tongue:

[size=1]hold on while your thing loads…[/size]

its pretty good so far, a bit confusing, but nice. i’d change the rollover sounds on the buttons, they get annoying pretty fast. i like the metal look to it, and its a good start:)

[edit]oh, and welcome to the forums:)[/edit]

not too bad looking!

I got ghostbumbs when i hurd that sound when you rollover the buttons.

welcome. now about your interface… id definately change the rollover sounds, they’re just annoying. try to make them something more short and sweet that just get to you after hearing it twice. otherwise its got a pretty good look to it.

I did not even notice the buttons till I saw the posts about the sound. Also thin out the bevel a lil bit. JMO

“ahh my freakin’ ears!”

grace grace, thank you all for sharing your thoughts. i really hate replying to my own threads but i didnt want to look snobby and not thank you guys/girls.

pertaining to the sound, is there any sound software like clip art software but for sounds?

thanks ~ reo2

soundforge www.soundforge.com i think

hey, you must reply to your own threads, otherwise where does does the dialog come from ??? =)

anyway try to makethe screen fit a bit more into the metal device. here it looks like it’s only sitting ontop of it

Dunno why i hate side scrolls and this fx is sort of annoying too, how about a lil grayish bg and to b very frank we have had many following this industrial,metallic theme, i believe in doing something different.Yet another metalic, sci-fy metallic interface, why do we have that screen/squarish somethin on the top :-s, mind u, this is also heavy for old systems, if u want an audiance worldwide, u gota test it on different systems…

Know u ll say “ENOUGH”

and ya

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Yeah the rollovers were really bad, so were when you hit them. The window in the upper left seems unneeded. Other than that not to bad for a first try.

Welcome to the forums also

i would tone the interface down a bit, too much soemtimes can be no good.

welcome as well