New logo - MC

I’ve done 2 logos for a Multimedia Club…
Need suggestions/critisms/which-one-is-better-answers

btw, in case u don’t know, Multimedia deals with computer stuff and other high-tech thingys =)

here’s the second one

I think both samples are a great start, but they both could use more work. They both have a lot of jagged edges. If I had to pick one out of the two then I would prefer the first one. I think it had more potential as a good logo. So work on the first one more. =)

The second one looks like a header for a paper or something. i like the first one more though. But they do need a bit of refining.

thx for the feedback…
yea, after much thought i too don’t think the 2nd one signifies much.
the jaggedness came about when i converted it to gif (don’t know why i did that). I made the logo in illustrator, u see.

well here it is in png format (the first one)

It’s definitly a nice starting, but you have to do some more specials about it. Work with different colors and so on…

oh…forgot to mention, i’m doing more of the designing part here. probably gonna get it printed on a t-shirt with a very tight budget, u see :sigh:
of course, u can always take the design of the logo and give it effects.