Please Critique

talk design
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http://contec.tv

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Here are the things I noticed:

  1. The way you have your setup now isn’t very well planned. I can see that you’re using a flash and HTML combination but it isn’t very well put together. Each button opens up a new page so your content just reloads and jumbs around.

  2. Most sites that I’ve seen that use this combination of flash and HTML only use flash to make their navigation and use HTML for content. Here you’re using flash for content so it’s not as smooth. You might as well go full flash and have your navigation work flawlessly with your content.

  3. Design wise, I can see that you have a concept going, but the way you layed things out is very unprofessional and messy.

  4. That glowman is a cool concept, but it wasn’t drawn out too well and looks too plain.

That’s about it so I hope those comments will be of some use to you, good luck. =)

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I really want to know how you do your images like that. I want to do something similar on my site for my photography page. Could you fill me in???

As for the site. I don’t like being limited to that tiny box to view everything in. I feel trapped. For the most part though, it seemed fine.

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I appreciate the input fron everyone!
You can learn to make the sliders here:

http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/infinite.htm

Good Luck!

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keep learn boys…!!
anyway check this site please
thanks
:cowboy:

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*Originally posted by KrazyKooter *
**I appreciate the input fron everyone!
You can learn to make the sliders here:

Good Luck! **

Awesome thanks, I put the slider on my pictures page. Looks great.

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i think overall it’s decent and pretty good. I can tell you are new
to design for most of the reasons that EG said.

The pic gallery is actually a nice touch. I think you did that very
well and it’s functional to your site’s purpose.
Here’s my few suggestions:

  1. Drop that red color. Awful color for a business site.
  2. Drop the font you chose. that Batman font is a free font that
    everyone in the world has, and it’s unoriginal.
  3. Decide on html OR Flash. the way the site is layed out, you
    should be using one or the other, not both. I think you should go
    with 100% flash, as it’s pretty much there already.
  4. uhh…“Glowman” ?? :whistle:
  5. the footer for navigation is unnecessary since your site is really
    short in length. and if nothing else, you should make it the same
    color as your site, and not bright red.

Sorry if these come off harsh, they aren’t meant to be. I just think
you could use some more planning and good advice from us here
at kirupa. Take it as you wish.

I think your site is very good, but could be WAY BETTER with just
a few improvements.

Good luck!

/unflux
:goatee: