Plz check this intro for me

hi…any comments good or bad plz…its not too long but hopefully it wil fit the image of an art gallery…the actual site it will link to is also being re-designed by me as the existing site is a bit hard 2 navigate and naff!!!


Hi there

I just had a look at your intro think, it’s Ok, but the swish imploding text mmmmm. But i hate swish. It’s a bit easy to go ott with it, stay subtle. But over all i like it.

i like it

only problem i have is the grey on white text, kinda hard to see:-\