hi people,
are all your fantastic feedback this week, i am very close to an end product. i am still missing about half the content…
C&C please :beam:
I don’t really like the white background.
And the Base_02 font doesn’t really fit with the clean fonts you used everwhere else.
ahhh nice work billystar 
i really like the rollover… i really do :thumbs: too bad your works aren’t up yet, let me know if you have put them up… I like to see your works man… those are awesome.
C&C
I like the rollover however I don’t like the blinking text, that’s kinda distracting, probably if you still want to keep it, make it softer use black on the first keyframe and a very dark gray on the second keyframe.
No home / back button?
this is a minor stuff but your header and the box that contains pictures… they don’t line up.
maybe it’s just me but i feel like the negative space is pretty dominant… something is missing…
anyway… nice work billystar
i see what you mean… but for the header i want to use a more distinctive font…any suggestions?
thanks for the kind comments 350z… thats a good tip for the blinking text, will do…
no home/back because the site is fully navigable from the menu…the first slide is just an appetiser…
i know what you mean about the negative space, but i want to keep a white bckd so im not sure…
i will post when mt industrial design work is up, glad it interests you!
I like it. Nice, simple and clean design. Good use of motion.
I agree with what’s been said about the base2 font and blinking. I’d also like to add that I’m not digging the way you scrunked the numbers.
Those coloured rectangles with the numbers on them are left over from the sliding menu system tutorial I’m sure Billy will fix it later.
ok, i changed the font…what do you think?
clean and simple font
Nice stuff, clear layout, practical nav - love the caption rollovers for the gallery thumbs-- put some of yer stuff in there if u can - looking kool so far, ( I agree header typeface a bit displaced with the res of the site- maybe something very stylised like oversized cursive bg font at 10% alpha with a small pixel font overlayed? - dunno jus a suggestion…
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blinking text is a no no 90% of the time, and this is one of them.
right, i think i need to finish this off, so thank you very much for takig the time to comment. :thumb:
thanks to flash g, hopekenny, DDD, coppertop and ya3 for their feedback this past week too…
i will post again on completion for thos who would like to see my works! :beam:
Billy
