well i was bored a while ago so re designed it again so here its is the sound aint looping right but that will sort out in a bit. im workin on animation for each page but i kinda realise im crappy at flash lol anyway here u go
The beginning image is really cool! But the flash… uhh…
1… the fonts are not good
2… the menu is a little strange
3… some things appear to be messed up, like in size and stuff.
hey.
i find it a little bit too slow. maybe if you would increase the fps it would look better (i.e. when the different sections open). also, as novatake said, the font is not too well chosen. and the last thing, i don’t know if you meant it to be that way, but when i go over the contact and guestbook button and, the background behind them doesn’t seem to be completed.
good luck!
i honestly don’t like this at all. There’s stuff everywhere, and the
3-d renders aren’t very good. The colors are unmatched to me,
and cause clashes in some sections.
Your splash page is ok, but the tutorial you followed to create it
is well known and unoriginal. Why don’t the colors from the
splash page carry over into the site? I was expecting them to,
but they didn’t. This makes it more inconsistant.
Also, I got an error after clicking enter, and that just does it in
for me right there anytime a page has script errors.
I would honestly have to suggest that you take some time and
learn some designing techniques before working in flash.
I’m not trying to be mean or harsh, just telling the truth as to
what I see. Please don’t take offense, as we all receive hard
criticism at some point in our design lives.
Use it to get better, not mad. 
/unflux
:goatee:
yeh i get wot ur sayin there is loadsa crap i aint soprted yet. I am workin on sum animations and **** to get rid of the crappy 3d thing and lookin for a new menu system.
the splash wasnt made by me which is prob why its familiar i am crappy with all that stuff and a guy offered to do it for me. wot else is there mmm lots ill get it sorted sooner or later cheers for the feedback
-Tom
