Thanks Ethan. Yea the font is plain. This sucker is officially done now though 'cause I sent it off before I checked in here.
Btw Ethan you can never be too cool for igloos and eskimos.:pleased:
lol PR Iāve been waiting for someone to point that out. It was a real pain just to move the text up half an inch and I was tired. Itās funny how design balance works because originally when I didnāt have 99 cents at the top it looked fine.
Looks good CG, Iām feelin it GJ. I like the difuse glow, works real well w/ that image. Only problem I have is all those lines in the text, I see what you were tryin to do but I think it would be stronger if they werenāt there, IMO. Very nice though.
I should start putting my critique stuff in here in D&D LoL, itās like pulling teeth to get a critique in S&C.
lol. Simplistik I always thought that S&C was for websites. Your work is awesome from what Iāve seen. If youāre hard up for a critique go ahead and pm me when you start a thread.
As for the lines. lol. Definitely not my best scratch effect.
yeah i think we scare the people in showcase - things are at like 105 views with 11 commentsā¦
maybe itās because our work leaves them
speechless?
muahahahaha
99cents? 5 dollars?
already mentioned :P, read above 
Hey bombing I replaced the old picture ^^^^ seeing as they liked it so much they wanted me to make it a flyer as well. You can see the noise effect way better on this one.
ooh, thatās cool, I like how you have it throughout the flyer/poster rather than just the text, it certainly makes it coolerā¦
this certainly is top notch 
LoL, thxā¦ Iām never āhard upā for a critique, I just like creative feedback, maybe something I didnāt do that could be doneā¦ w/e. You should lounge around S&C now and again, yea i got 74 or so view on my thread and only 4 replys or soemthing like that. I think from now on though Iāll post here in D&D.
I was looking at the flyer, and the noise seems real extreme now, when you look at it as a whole. I almost thought it looked better a little more subtle, and knocked back. Eh, I dunno thatās my .02
cries out in agony MY EYES! O GOD MY EYES! I CANāT BELIEVE WHAT IāM READING!
Donāt like the noise eh? < yosemite sam voice > OOOO themās fightinā words < / yosemite sam voice > lol
I really really dig the noise. I mean Iād marry the noise on this piece if I could. lol
Seriously though, Iām going to check out S&C right now and Iād better not find any noise in any of your work. hehe
I like it more this way :P, donāt you worrry about that noise
i think the noise looks good, just weird when its shrunk down lilke that, (i mean when its printed, it will probably look a lot different, and better). What is up with the www.playtimebowling.com, that just looks wierd, i like just plain white text personallyā¦
o and simplistik, do have links to any of your workā¦ i mean all ur sites just have splash pages, do you have anywork i could see (battles, sites, print, etc.)? Sorry for being off topic.
looks like a movie poster or somthin
I have a logo sheet (about 1/10 or less of all my work) and what not that I put together for 2 ppl that wanted to battle me:
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/samples.jpg
some other stuff Iāve done Iāve posted here b4:
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/toi_new.jpg
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/Not_the_Knoll.jpg
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz/main.html <āunder cont.
anywho, Iāve got lots of stuff I just donāt advertise. I put my stuff up in S&C if you just want to look at some of my posts. most of my portfolio is for Reebok which Iām under a NDA. But DDD can vouch for me too 
As for the noise, yeaā¦ sorry :(. I may start a thread in S&C and dedicate it to a image I do w/ all noise :). I did notice something else, is there a slight dropshadow under the words? If so I like that, makes it pop off the design, and makes it look better, if not must be my eyes, and maybe you should think about a dropshadow, LoL.
I think the movie poster looks is what he was goin for
lol mlkdave for the record I didnāt create that website.
Yea there is a slight drop shadow on the lettering. The $0.99 was created after finishing the freaky friday lettering and if you look closely you can see I had some trouble matching them up.
I remember seeing some of your reebok work and it was really cool.
S&C really is dead. Itās a shame when such nice work doesnāt get commented on http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?p=579543#post579543
Nice Work CG,
just the text located on the bottom, is to impacted. But otherwise awsome work
i say that CG, Simplistik, MLK, Ethan, and I form some sort of Coalition for somethingā¦something having to do with artā¦
whoās with me
Do we have a secret handshake? If so Iām in.
I think the more important question isā¦ do we get donations?
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