Check my 1st intro! - not comlete yet!

1

I’m a junior in flash! moves not so smart and elegant !
I will improve and develop BUT WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT??

Thanx

press IEEJA in http://www.variants01.yo.lv

2

Not bad but you might want to watch the sounds a little. The first ones hurt my ears. I liked the waving text. Looks good:)

3

I agree with sintax. The first sound hurt my ears as well.

It is pretty good though.

4

THANX

5

i dont get it. is the intro the thing after i click the button? also, im not a fan of full screen sites.

6

I liked it man, great layout and use of colours. Two things I would change.

  1. Give the option of fullscreen or popup
  2. make the loop work so there is no gap in the sound.

Once again - I love the colours and the text movment. Very good start

7

yes very good. nothing hurt my ears so you must have taken it out. watch the music, it skips and stuff so you might want to fix that, but other wise…i love it.

8

I actually like you music :slight_smile:

(except it would be better if the loop was a perfect one, i.e. without a break)

But I like your overall animation.

Keep up the good work.
=)