Check my site dudes :)

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hey everybody, just check my site:

www.hellstorm.tk

i just want more people to know my site :slight_smile:

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Interesting…but I think it could use more work. I’ll point out a few things.

  1. Right off the bat, your buttons are huge, there is no need for such big buttons and I’m sure you can do better than just plan square buttons. Also it would be nice to see a better rollover effect instead of just the white text.

  2. Your red and orange text is a bit hard to read, honestly I would never use red text on a black background at all, but then that’s just me.

  3. Your overall layout could use work too, it doesn’t have a color scheme. I think it would look nicer with maybe more graphics thrown in and a better planned color scheme.

  • EG
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I checked out your site - I would say the thing that I didnt really like about it was how long it was…

But what I did like about it was most everything else :slight_smile: Electron is right, you should make those buttons a little nicer but the water effect on the left and the look of the page is very nice.

Great start!

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you have some good effects on this site, but im sure you already know about what is cool. Now let me tell you what i didn’t take to very well.

In the opener, you have please spelled ‘plz’ thats cool if thats what you want to do, but understand that it doesn’t come off as very professional…

Everything else was already covered by what the other people have said about it, regarding the buttons, color scheme, and overall height.

You’ve come to the right place to get advice, so take it for what it is and use it to improve. Your well on your way with the skills that you have, good work… :stuck_out_tongue: