Human Potrait

Hi guys,
here’s my second attempt on human potrait. Any constructive comments and criticisms are welcome. :slight_smile:

dammm! Another piece of art! Nice pic man!

It’s a little too smudgy in some parts. Like the eyes. Make them more solid and well defined. Especially that little shine in the eyes - don’t blur it… looks like he’s got cataract. Other than that, I think it’s a great portrait. Well proportioned and you have an interesting style.

very nice, althought to colours are a bit to…bright,

Thanks for all your complements. Glad that you guys like it. Btw Rengirl, I kind of get your point for the eyes. :slight_smile: Besides the eyes, which other parts do you find too smudgy as well?

It looks very nice. May be u can change colour of the hair and brows. Otherwise it is perfect.

Erm…The person that I’ve drawn here is an asian with black hair and black eyebrows. The colour that I use for his hair and eyebrows is the darkest colour I can get. Maybe you can give me some suggestions on the colours that I can use for his hair or eyebrows. :slight_smile:

The hair and brows doesn’t look black. It looks Purple colour. The Shirt, Hair and Brows are in the same colour. Maybe u can change the shirt colour!

I have to agree with you that the shirt is purple and the hair and the eyebrows may not be black. But still, I don’t see that the hair and eyebrows could be purple in any ways. Perhaps it’s just me. But anyway, I will still take in your advice and change the colour for the shirt. Thanks for your comments.