My awful first tries at Cinema 4D modeling and design............dont be cruel

talk design
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how are my first tries…

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the lights are so intense. :frowning:

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Not bad.

If you’ve got the Advanced Renderer (comes with XL & Studio bundle), try this:

  • Make a big ground plane
  • Make a sphere and put it sitting on the ground
  • Create a Sky object
  • Make a new material, leave all settings as they are
  • Put the new material on the Ground and Sphere
  • Make another new material
    • Uncheck all the stuff on the material (eg. Color, Reflection, etc)
    • Check ‘Luminance’
  • Put this material onto the Sky object
  • Open up your render settings
  • Under Radiosity, turn it ‘on’
  • Under Options, uncheck ‘Auto Light’
  • Render it!

You should have a clean milky-white scene with a ball on the ground and soft shadows everywhere :slight_smile:

I personally love that style of render.

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lighting could be modified a bit. i like the first render:)

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First is the best… the rest suck (no offence)

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thanks for the ctrits…I have to admit that my first tries were kind of crappy. I did them just a day ago. I just did this one since I started this morning. what should I improve on


its amazing what reading a few tutorials can teach you

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how is this for improvment. just did it today

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Wow, not bad. You’re really gettin’ the hang of C4D. And also, welcome to the world of 3D!

GBP

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you can do so much with 3D that you cant do with 2D, I have to say that is its amazing.

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Looks really good! Make some more for us. :slight_smile:

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all of them look good considering they’re your first models. that mech walker thingy is really interesting. it really looks like it’s really going somewhere.

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Heh, yeah. Kudos to you. I never was any good at designing robotic stuffs.

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anything beyond machinery is beyond me…didnt rlly learn how to do muc else, the mech is almost done…I will post in a sec

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almost done with it. anything that I could do to improve on the design or any rendering tips

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lol smooth it out more :stuck_out_tongue:

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Hmmyeah… That top cockpit part and the feet look kinda ‘crumpled’. You modelled them yourself, didn’t you? Try sticking a Phong tag on them, or use HyperNURBS, or clean up your modelling :stuck_out_tongue:

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thanks, i really didnt knw what they were for?lol
I will try that

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i did it,

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