I posted this site last weekend, really wasn’t finished(and probably shouldn’t have posted it).
I just finished up(for the most part), and think it’s came a long way.
Tell me what you think. It’s not 5megs, I promise.
Thanks
Nick
hi, I’m new on kirupa, just “walking around”, I’ve find this topic…
Take a look on outlines of your page layout, I’ve see some lines bigger than others…
… and sorry 4 my terrible english!
Bye!
well, to be honest, the layout is okay, but it has a very corperate/templatey feel to it. This, coupled with the music selection comes across as institutional in feel. Ultimately, from a design standpoint I think it lacks elegance.
The color scheme could be experimented with.
I personally don’t like horz. image scrollers that don’t have a seperate timeline control.
I would place an image with every page of copy. I would organize the copy in a more “graphically pleasing” manner.
All the transitions are exactely the same.
The audio turns off, but once you select a button it turns on again.
The text is fuzzy. Check the x/y position.
well, to be honest, the layout is okay
mmm…
beware of outlines! 
