Redesign

I recreated the design for my personal website. Feel free to check it out.

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All comments and criticisims are welcome.

Not bad, even if a bit self indulgent. The horizontal scrollbars annoyed me on the Iframe. Not digging the Times New Roman (but thats probably just me.) The horizontal rules are kinda annoying as well. I like the way it all works together though, the flash, side images, and iframe background are seamless :thumb:

its not to bad i dont like how the buttons dont tell u where there going before you click them, that has always annoyed me though about sites. it might just be me. Like AP said please change the font fair enough its easy to read etc etc but its just a little boring it looks to muh like my ICT coursework lol over all I like it except the splash picture but then topless men aint my thing very cool al together though i like the colours btw

-Tom

Thanks for all the comments. I don’t believe the text is times new roman though. It’s, Arial according to my html, perhaps you don’t have it installed? What’s a better font to use?

As for the topless guy, that’s me… lol.

what horizontal thing are you talking about?

agree with novatake about the buttons, should be some indication on what they are. i want to know where im going before i go there. maybe a mouse over effect as well to know that im over a button.

I think APDesign is talking about the horizonatal Scroller you have for your information (as well i think when he was saying horizontal lines, i think he meant vertical line, that are in your content), I didnt really find it annoying, i was more annoyed about how much information you have on your site. Not in the infomation perspective just in the presentation of it, for dates and stuff like that cant you make it a bit more designy and create some nice tables or something, theres just a over load of type. every page its the same with just type after type in all the same format.

Concept of your site in nice, it just a matter of not boring people with type after type, if you need to present that much information at least give it some better formatting.

Hope this helps
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I pressume that is you with the wings on the site:-\

Looks very camp to me. Not that there’s anything wrong with that of course.

Good the way the graphics are put together.

you and EthanM should get together and do some work

who’s ethanM? THanks for the comments, I completely agree now that you all brought up those points. I can’t think of an interesting way to create a table to display the info though. Are there any examples that I may look at?