-=spets Pro=-

talk design
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hey guys, i’ve been working on my site a little bit, can u give me some advice on what i should change, i finished the graphics page, working on the wallpapers page, and most of the site is still under contruction, and if i forgot, please remind me of some of the thins u told me to change last time, thanks - spets

http://spets.vze.com

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The intro needs a skip button… You’re keeping your visitor from getting to the “meat” of your site. Also, as a portfolio I wouldn’t advertise yourself as “cheap”… IMO it would make the prospective client draw negative opinions on your work if you describe yourself that way.

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Well, the idea is there, but :

[a] It’s too dark for me.

** Add some music, graphics, colours, and stuff like that in your intro. Repeating “Spets Pro” all the time is kind of… well… boring. Also, like ironikart said, add a skip button if you want to keep it online. After your intro, make it go directly to your website. I was waiting, but nothing happened, until I hit “enter” again. I think this has something to do with your JavaScript. My debugger said something about line 26 (object expected) and line 1 (syntax error).

Good luck with it :slight_smile:

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I think that I’d better Kijinku. That there should be a skip intro button and the color scheme should be a lot lighter. And the error in the enter button.

Here are somethings that I’ve noticed in your website. =)

  1. I think it would be better if you make the arrow in the graphics section into a lighter color or put a indication that there is an arrow there.

  2. Why not make that first 3 of the pictures appear in the graphics section instead of making it empty cause people will think that your graphics section is empty.

  3. Instead of just making the forward button in the graphics section, make a reverse button.

That’s all and good Luck!!!:beam:

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I agree with Kajinku, it’s way too dark. I also think that the “scanline” effect on your graphics is overly used…