Www.clearimpressions.org finished

ello

I’d like some feedback please on my completed portfolio:

www.clearimpressions.org

all comments greatly appreciated!

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Very nice!
I really like the buttons you used on the portfolio page
Also nice transitions in the spotlight thingy
I don’t really like the font used on your buttons and on the top of the page though
It looks like it doesnt fits in this style…
And if i were you i’d remove the “skills” section, now it looks like you know almost everythink of flash mx… Maybe you could better do it like this:
flash MX - Advanced

Hmmm, I don’t know.
Looks a bit bare, you know? It’s a metallic design, but it’s just metal plates in the background - no visual context. Maybe spice it up a little bit, make it look like the section titles (Welcome, Spotlight etc.) look engraved into the metal or something.
And you got pale colours in the menue but strong colours on the links and header, doesn’t really fit.
But I don’t wanna nag - the site has a good structure and nice transitions and buttons.
There, hope that was of a little help.

i thought the site was really smooth. I’m not sure whether i liked the metal texture or not, i don’t think some of your solid filled buttons fitted with the texture - it looks too much of a graphic change. Your banner and nav graphics on the edges looked a little jagged, especially on the right corners.

Apart from that good site.

Thanks for the comments :love:

The style is fairly simple but I wanted a site that looked nice but isn’t a large download (the initial download is only 70k) so I didn’t want to go overboard with the design, although I like the idea of making the panel title text embossed or something similar and yes I agree that some of the buttons don’t look like they fit in properly, I’ll look at re-working them. I’ll also experiment with some deeper colours for the nav buttons and see how that looks

cheers all =)