h2loaded

talk design
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Hey guys/gals

I just want you to check and comment on my progress so far with this website.
Its for a web design competition for high schol students. There still needs to be lot of work with the content though, and its due next week i think ;(
lol, ill just leave the content part to my frends.

All comments and suggestion welcome

link is
<a href=“http://www.geocities.com/sonnyzmisc/loaded/index.htm” target="_blank"> here</a>

thanks all:)

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Not bad, decent design work. Only thing i see that bugs me is when you click the button it reloads the page, with the new html file on the bottom. Instead what you could do is use frames to split the page into 2, then link the button in flash to the frame and load the html that way. It will make the design look cleaner on a slower connection. Other then that n1.

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Thanks for the advice “Tits”(teeeheheehe)
I will tkae your advice into consideration, although im trying to move away from using frames, i just dont lyk them foe some reason.

sonny:)

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There seems to be a little too much going on the the header for my tastes. Between the h2o molecule and the pure aquarium its all just a little too random and bouncy.

Also, when mousing between the link buttons quickly, the text in the information panel gets muddled because the mouse off event takes a little too long.

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alright thanks tenkai
My team doesnt want to get rid of the animations but ill make less random moving fish in the tank, and I found out why the text i getting mudled, so ill be fixing that
Thanx

nemore suggestions are welcome :slight_smile:

sonny

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I would second the points already mentioned, especially about the page reloading thing.
The text at the top left is…interesting

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haha, u zoomed in on it eh?
lols, dont mind me at 3 am hehe

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yeah but aren’t frames really hard to index by search engines. that’s one of the main reasons i don’t use them anymore.

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I kinda like it!!
The adds kill it all though! :frowning:

try an add free host I think I saw the link to one that seems good
here it is:

BY RAGIN REBEL

The best free site for developers is by far http://f2o.org…They offer PHP, ASP, ColdFusion and Perl…They even throw in a MySQL database…All this and no adds…!!!..So if you’re interested in learning a new craft that’s the place to be…!!!..BTW, f2o stands for Freedom to Operate…

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thanks ishixp, im just temporarily hosting it there so i can show people. Its going to be put a sever that the competition people give us :stuck_out_tongue:

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Your navigation doesn’t really connect with the main section of your pages. It looks distant both in terms of physical distance and appeal.