My first website

talk design
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Well, I’m a newbie in the forum and as a web designer (I think that’s too much to say). :-\
These are the facts:
I’m a grown girl (32). I live in Argentina, where I work and have a little child of 7 years old. My job is really weird because it’s a little mix: I’m a photographer, designer, painter, decorator…well it’s complicated to make it short… :smirk:
Last year I did a course of Dramweaver, Flash and Actionscript.
So, here it is. Everything you’ll see in those pages, is what I do for a living.
I hope you like it. And I promise next time will be better! :wink:

http://faseunodesign.com.ar/
or
http://www31.brinkster.com/faseuno

and please…forgive me for my gramatical mistakes… I don’t write in english too often… :-\
:slight_smile:

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this is pretty good considering its your first flash site.
keep working on it, and dont give up.=)

-Alex

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Hi there and welcome to the forum. =)

I can see that your very capable of designing and what you have here is a nice example. The layout is very clean and organized, but I do see a little problem with proximity meaning how things are spaced out. I just think there’s too much empty space on your layout right now and I think it would help if you reduced the size of your layout a bit more.

Also I think it would be nice to see a bit more color to make it more interesting. I can see that you have hints of color here and there, but a bit more wouldn’t hurt.

Overall I like what you’ve done, good job. =)

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oh! thanks!
It’s really nice when people supports you … so, thanks a lot!

Alex, this is my first web page at all! (not only in flash…) that’s why I was a little afraid this kind of presentation…haha… :slight_smile:

Well, electrongeek, the colour is a hole theme for me… ! that’s why I preferred soft and desaturated ones. Perhaps next time, I’ll try more colours, on the other site I’m working now (some kind of garage, or playground where I’ll show all the other stuff, some thoughts… icons, and so on)
But I’ll see if I can do something with the dimensions, and blank areas. So, thanks a lot for that good point to pay attention.

well…thanks again!!! =)

Carina.

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i agree with color being added to make it a bit interesting, but it’s
perfectly clear to me that you didn’t want that. So, in that regard,
the monochrome theme is nice. I agree with the spacing
comment, however.

My big thing, is smooth animation. The best way to do that is to
increase the framerate of the movie to 30+. It makes the
animation seem faster, but you can adjust it to look more like
what you wanted to begin with. Try that, and see how much
smoother it gets. :wink:

I like the layout a lot. It’s clean and simple. My motto is: Less is
more. So, you fit that nicely.

Great work! especially for a first site. =)

/unflux
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