One site check please

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I’m not a design major. I was an education major. But, I have been a Flasher for four years part-time. Could someone give me a site check. Th site is built for teachers in k-12 and students in k-12.

Thanks.

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I have forgotton the link(-:

http://www.scottwaldman.com

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Things I’ve noticed:

  1. When the biker bikes down the road, scale him down. It looks like he’s floating now.

  2. Change the font. It’s not illegible but it would be better using another one.

  3. Technology Webshop shouldn’t be blinking like that. Instead try a pulsing glow behind it.

  4. The mail form is quite messy too. Align everything to the left and size down the font size and it’ll already look a lot better.

  5. Hey, I just noticed sounds are randomly loaded. Nice ! :thumb:

  6. Why do you link to other pages ? Display it all into Flash !

  7. The windows pop over the balloon with “Meet the WM here” on it.

  8. The meet the webmaster preloader is nice :thumb: And the “Seconds to go” was correct ! :thumb:

  9. The cloud floating is quite crappy :-\ I can see the outlines.

That’s it :slight_smile: BTW, Is that you in the movie ? :slight_smile:

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Thanks Voetsjoeba excellent comments. Now that you mention it the biker looks a little off. The cloud does stink but, I’m not sure whether to remove it yet.

Thanks I am proud of the random music.

The blinking text is random colors between four colors that I’m proud of and is in its second transformation.

I will attempt the biker and cloud and play with the form. I believe my layout is too tiny for all the other content. It is very background oriented. I have a lot of content on the other pages like pdf files and lists of wb resources. Flash Math games and Fash madlibs.

By the way the video is a payed actor I’m not as handsom.

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