Zawdie site

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okay, check out my site and lemme know what u think.

www.zawdie.com/test/zawdie3update.html

all constuctive comments are acceptable

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What u’ve done so far is good but what i’d suggest is this.

  1. How about a little intro to grab the users attention before loading the main content.

  2. Transitions, doesnt have to be fancy.

  3. use Dynamic text boxes intead of Static (looks sharper).

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thanx, dynamic text does look sharper but i want to have color on specific words (for emphasis). Can this b done with dynamic txt.

The transition idea will b taken into consideration. Cant say i will definately will use it though due to time constraints(wanna replace the actual site soon).

thnx mang

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I’m almost certain you can. :smiley:

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how? anybody?

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I like the image and the nav, I think that on mouse over its very hard to read the text, maybe a shadow would help! I would design 6 big images like this, and then change them as u interact between the sections. I like this font on ur header much more then the one on the site that says Hybrid Creativity…is that slogan or a name of the studio? or is ZAWDIE the studio logo? I’m confused!

great start

peace:P

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Your site is very good but portfolio section takes a lotta time to load.

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Here are the things I noticed:

  1. Your content is scattered everywhere. You should try to organize and create a cleaner layout.

  2. Also your choices of colors aren’t too good either, they’re not working well with each other.

  3. Body text is a bit blurry as well.

  4. The white bottom half is killing your design so you might want to redesign this layout.

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*Originally posted by electrongeek *
**Here are the things I noticed:

  1. Your content is scattered everywhere. You should try to organize and create a cleaner layout.

Do you mean in terms of the flash content on top above the html text at the bottom of the page? if u do, then i definately spotted that! will get to it soon.

  1. Also your choices of colors aren’t too good either, they’re not working well with each other.

lol. and to think i thought this was a fly color scheme. come to think of it, it does look a bit dark.

  1. Body text is a bit blurry as well.

nuff said, i think i need to edit the amount of text i hav in there

  1. The white bottom half is killing your design so you might want to redesign this layout. **

thnx 4 the advice yall! subjectivity is a beeatch! lol :sure: :trout:

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Your site is very good but portfolio section takes a lotta time to load.

are u on 56k?
either way, i’ll look into that!

thnx mang!

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I like the image and the nav, I think that on mouse over its very hard to read the text, maybe a shadow would help! I would design 6 big images like this, and then change them as u interact between the sections. I like this font on ur header much more then the one on the site that says Hybrid Creativity…is that slogan or a name of the studio? or is ZAWDIE the studio logo? I’m confused!

great start

peace

The 'hybrid creativity" bit is the slogan. thats y i faded it a bit. maybe some more alpha will do the trick.

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u can try :stuck_out_tongue: